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Penetration

Pushing in slowly
A deep sigh passes her lips
As two become one

Wh1skeySwagger

Written by Wh1skeySwagger

(Swagger)

Published 16th Oct 2020

#erotic #lust #orgasm #passion #senryu

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Re. Penetration

16th Oct 2020 2:10pm

That gasp is the epitome of being taken, breathlessly !

Love the brevity, and depth...🔥

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Wh1skeySwagger (Swagger)

17th Oct 2020 7:44am

Thank you Shadow

And thank you for taking the time to check out my work :)

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Re. Penetration

LostViking (Lost Viking)

16th Oct 2020 4:58pm

Brief and clear capture of a magical human moment.

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Wh1skeySwagger (Swagger)

17th Oct 2020 7:44am

Thank you LV

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Re. Penetration

16th Oct 2020 9:26pm

Echo Lost Viking. The picture adds poignancy.

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Wh1skeySwagger (Swagger)

17th Oct 2020 7:45am

thank you Solomon, and as always thank s for stopping in as well

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Re. Penetration

16th Oct 2020 10:08pm

just perfect 👌🏻
xo
🌹
B

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Wh1skeySwagger (Swagger)

17th Oct 2020 7:45am

Thanks blue, I am glad you enjoyed it

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Re. Penetration

18th Oct 2020 6:19pm

Beautiful and vivid!

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