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Temple
There's raw skin here
It feels like heat, pin pricks
I love the feel of your love
Your temple modify
I open myself to you raven
I see you
Seen by you
Raw skin and all
I need you
Your heated love
Your temple modify
In the moments I think of pain
In the months I experience joy
I open myself to you sister
To be seen
Fully
Blood and all
Modify me
I miss you
Needles and ink
Laughs and tears
Your temple modify
I need you again
Won't I always need you?
Finish this one
A junkie with a fix
Modify me
It feels like heat, pin pricks
I love the feel of your love
Your temple modify
I open myself to you raven
I see you
Seen by you
Raw skin and all
I need you
Your heated love
Your temple modify
In the moments I think of pain
In the months I experience joy
I open myself to you sister
To be seen
Fully
Blood and all
Modify me
I miss you
Needles and ink
Laughs and tears
Your temple modify
I need you again
Won't I always need you?
Finish this one
A junkie with a fix
Modify me
Published 15th Oct 2020
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15th Oct 2020 1:17pm
Needing another tattoo? Totally get it! 😬
I mean, technically I don’t know if this is about tattoos, but either way it’s a nice write. Welcome to the DU.
I mean, technically I don’t know if this is about tattoos, but either way it’s a nice write. Welcome to the DU.
15th Oct 2020 6:10pm
It is and It's also about the specific connection I made with the artist, thank you for reading.
16th Oct 2020 8:49pm
Wow-what a really interesting way to write a piece about a tattoo and its artist. I would have never put this together if it wasn't for the first poet's comment before me. Very well done and a great creative and imaginative spill. Welcome to the DUP and thank you for sharing. Looking forward to reading some more.
17th Oct 2020 6:11am
Thank you that helps me feel welcomed and want to post more. I look forward to reading some of your work as well.
17th Oct 2020 3:55pm
I say post away to your heart's content. Do not be afraid or intimidated by how other poets present their pieces. As long as you write from your heart and you have a passion for what you write you will always be a star in my book. I have a variety of genres that I write about. Maybe I'll see you drop by again.
