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Disappearing ashes
I'm standing in the middle of a room filled with everyone I love and everything I have worked to achieve over the years.
One by one my loved ones have disappeared and everything I have achieved turns to ash and blows away in the Wind.
I go to run to help someone maybe bring them back only to find myself Frozen to the floor.
One by one I'm losing them and everything else. I go to scream but nothing is heard when I open my mouth.
I am Frozen and silenced powerless watching my life disappear and there isn't anything I can do besides turn to Ash and Blow Away With the Wind.
One by one my loved ones have disappeared and everything I have achieved turns to ash and blows away in the Wind.
I go to run to help someone maybe bring them back only to find myself Frozen to the floor.
One by one I'm losing them and everything else. I go to scream but nothing is heard when I open my mouth.
I am Frozen and silenced powerless watching my life disappear and there isn't anything I can do besides turn to Ash and Blow Away With the Wind.
Published 14th Oct 2020
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15th Oct 2020 2:18am
15th Oct 2020 3:54am
15th Oct 2020 4:35am
Dear M,
Don’t forget the dizzying spiral free fall as the cherry on top. Your closing stanza sums it up brilliantly. Feeling like the air has been let out of your lungs and there’s not even a flicker of light can feel terribly overwhelming and you’ve written that in this write amazingly real. This piece is very relatable and well expressed.
H🌷
Don’t forget the dizzying spiral free fall as the cherry on top. Your closing stanza sums it up brilliantly. Feeling like the air has been let out of your lungs and there’s not even a flicker of light can feel terribly overwhelming and you’ve written that in this write amazingly real. This piece is very relatable and well expressed.
H🌷
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