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The Perfect Storm
Without warning, her mind kicks into overdrive
her subconscious transformed
oozing irrational thoughts
Consumed by the impending storm
Perceptions, become truth.
Her fear flashes as lightning strikes,
heightening her emotions
Her friend's loyalty she questions
Booming thunder reverberates
muffling her rational voice.
Zealous in her opinion
She rains down her convictions
Adrenalin accelerates her beating heart.
Hatches secured prepared to fight
Treated no better than a stranger
Disrespected is her muses honour
The cyclone gains momentum
Exposing deep seated roots
Self-control lacking
Broken riverbanks, flood water rising
Swept away by her torrential storm
alone amongst the debris
Reflecting...
Of forgiveness is she deserving....
her subconscious transformed
oozing irrational thoughts
Consumed by the impending storm
Perceptions, become truth.
Her fear flashes as lightning strikes,
heightening her emotions
Her friend's loyalty she questions
Booming thunder reverberates
muffling her rational voice.
Zealous in her opinion
She rains down her convictions
Adrenalin accelerates her beating heart.
Hatches secured prepared to fight
Treated no better than a stranger
Disrespected is her muses honour
The cyclone gains momentum
Exposing deep seated roots
Self-control lacking
Broken riverbanks, flood water rising
Swept away by her torrential storm
alone amongst the debris
Reflecting...
Of forgiveness is she deserving....
Published 9th Oct 2020
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9th Oct 2020 9:12pm
The storm rips through everything but the end it ends better. Keep on writing.
10th Oct 2020 4:49am
Just one storms that evolves in life. The question is the ending and the lessons. You have a positive ending. Exceptional write and message!🌺🌺👍
5th Jun 2021 8:02am
Yes she is, after a relation has been formed.
From personal experience, you hope to recognize the erratic storm. You ride it out, not fighting it, Because if you do, the bond can break. When the storm is over and the sea is calm, self reflection on her part will recognize the storm was not as catastrophic as predicted. Normalcy resumes.
From personal experience, you hope to recognize the erratic storm. You ride it out, not fighting it, Because if you do, the bond can break. When the storm is over and the sea is calm, self reflection on her part will recognize the storm was not as catastrophic as predicted. Normalcy resumes.
