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Mitigation

Oh if you think you’ve given praise
to women when you say,
perhaps to mitigate, assuage,
the ignorance that's shown
in all your patriarchal hunches,
that they are wiser than
some stupid men,
you need to think again.
 
To have more sense  
than those whose brains
are mush
is hardly something
that’s beyond the ken
of even children set below
the age of ten.
 
So what you’ve done
in saying what you’ve said
is set the bar for wisdom down so low
you’ve made all women dunces.
 
And by the way,
your title of this prose in line-breaks piece
doth need, in order to be comprehensible,
a statement on the thing it is
for which the "wiser" are responsible.
Written by Baldwin
Published | Edited 6th Feb 2024
Author's Note
The sexism in J-Z's "Selfish Love" and his attempt to take it back in his "The Wiser Are Responsible" (though for whom or what he does not say).
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