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Save Me

Save Me
I am drowning
In this place I call my own
Once Your In This Place
Youll forever be alone
There is no way out
But To find a love so true
But for me im here forever
Cause I hate the words "i love you"
Ive been broken
Ive been tainted
Ive been left alone
And scarred
So for me
Escaping my own will be very,very hard
So Somebody Please Save Me
Break me out of my own
Or Forever ill stay
And forever be alone

Written by LoveKilled_Sydney

Published 29th Jan 2012

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to the rescue....

goodest

29th Jan 2012 10:57pm

open your heart & let me in
give me your honor so that i may defend
it with my Life because you are my Love
thats the only way it can be deemed from Above
& right now it is time to realize
that my greatest Beauty lives in your eyes
welcoming me to your thighs innermost treasure
let me rescue your heart & do it with such pleasure...

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I feel ya

hensleyb420

29th Jan 2012 11:03pm

I know where you're coming from. I was in a relationship for about two years, and we broke up. Then three months later she gets married, then preganent from a guy she talked shit about all through our relationship, soooo that basically tells u that she wasn't right. The good one's always find you, not the other way around. I like the poem, keep it up.