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“Whipped” ... A Poem written by Big Virge 21/9/2020
Okay So ...
Let Me Deal With This QUICK ... !!!
So ... Here It Is ...
A Response To This Chick ...
Whose Pseudonym Is ... “ Whipped “ ...
As Well As This One ... “ Diz” ... ?!?
Who .....
THINKS She Can Make CLAIMS ...
That BIG VIRGE Deals In HATE ...
Well Just Like YOUR Dizzy Name ...
You Must Be Quite INSANE ...
To Say What You Have Said ...
About How I Express ... !!!
Now In Reading YOUR Poems ... !!!
You CLEARLY Need Some HELP ...
In Dealing With ... YOURSELF ... !!!
And Need To RECOGNISE ...
The HATRED That YOU ...
... DON’T DISGUISE ... !!!
In The Lyrics That You Write ...
That Seem To Be About Guys ...
Who You Want Between Your Thighs ...
Who Have Clearly RUN A MILE ... !!!
When Dealing With The Way ...
You Choose To Use Your Brain ...
So You Wanted My Attention ...
Well Now You’re Gonna Get It ... !!!
You’re Clearly Quite PATHETIC ... !!!
Or Are You Just ... Bi-Polar ... ?!?
Or Just A DESPERATE LONER ... ?!?
Who CAN'T Get ANY MAN ...
To EVER ... Understand ...
The ANGER That You Have ...
So STOP Pointing Your Fingers ...
Because of Hate That LINGERS ..........
DEEP INSIDE Your SOUL ...
Your Psychiatrist Must Know ... !!!
That The Men In Those White Coats
Are Ready To ... Take HOLD ...
of The ANGER That CONTROLS ...
The Way Your Thinking Rolls ...
It’s DISTURBING For Me To See ... !!!
That You CLAIM To LIKE To Read ...
SOME Poetry That Comes From Me ...
Cos’ You’re CLEARLY Quite CRAZY ... !?!?!
Is It ATTENTION That You Seek ... ?
Which Is Why You Claim That It’s ... ME ...
Who Has This ... HATEFUL STREAK ... ?!?
Well Listen Madame WHIPPED ... !!!
These Words AREN’T Witty Quips ... !!!
These Words Are Saying This ...
I Suggest That You ... DESIST ...
From Reading BIG VIRGE Scripts ... !!!!
And YES I’m ... SERIOUS ... !!!!!
I’m NOT The Type of Guy ...
With Whom You Should ...
.... Pick FIGHTS .... !!!
SUPERIOR I’m NOT ...
But I KNOW What I Have Got ...
An HONESTY That ROCKS ...
Your DIZZY Cotton Socks ...
Your Complexes EXIST ...
Because You Do Seem WHIPPED ...
WITHOUT Being ... Chained To Ships ... ?!?
So Just .....
PLEASE Keep Your Thoughts ZIPPED ... !!!
And Bitch Within YOUR Scripts ...
About These ... Mother Fuckers ... !!!
Who Clearly Prefer ... OTHERS ... !!!
And UNDERSTANDABLY So ...
When Looking At Your Quotes
Cos’ It’s ANGER That YOU Seem To HOLD ... !!!
While Words I Write Let My Anger .... GO ... !!!!!
You Need To THINK Before Making Quotes ...
And INACCURATE Statements In Your ACCUSATIONS ...
That PROVE That Your Mind ...
Is Somewhat VACANT ...
And Clearly Deals In HATRED ... !!!
So I Suggest You Stick To Your Quest ...
To Write ... Your Book ...
That’s Gonna WRITE ITSELF ... ?
Your TRIPPIN’ And Clearly Need Some Help ...
Because Whatever You Cook Needs To Stay On The Shelf ...
Because Whatever Script That You Choose To Flip ...
Is Bound To Be One of Some DIZZY Chick ...
Who Has CLEARLY Been ...
.... MENTALLY ....
............. WHIPPED ........... !!!
Let Me Deal With This QUICK ... !!!
So ... Here It Is ...
A Response To This Chick ...
Whose Pseudonym Is ... “ Whipped “ ...
As Well As This One ... “ Diz” ... ?!?
Who .....
THINKS She Can Make CLAIMS ...
That BIG VIRGE Deals In HATE ...
Well Just Like YOUR Dizzy Name ...
You Must Be Quite INSANE ...
To Say What You Have Said ...
About How I Express ... !!!
Now In Reading YOUR Poems ... !!!
You CLEARLY Need Some HELP ...
In Dealing With ... YOURSELF ... !!!
And Need To RECOGNISE ...
The HATRED That YOU ...
... DON’T DISGUISE ... !!!
In The Lyrics That You Write ...
That Seem To Be About Guys ...
Who You Want Between Your Thighs ...
Who Have Clearly RUN A MILE ... !!!
When Dealing With The Way ...
You Choose To Use Your Brain ...
So You Wanted My Attention ...
Well Now You’re Gonna Get It ... !!!
You’re Clearly Quite PATHETIC ... !!!
Or Are You Just ... Bi-Polar ... ?!?
Or Just A DESPERATE LONER ... ?!?
Who CAN'T Get ANY MAN ...
To EVER ... Understand ...
The ANGER That You Have ...
So STOP Pointing Your Fingers ...
Because of Hate That LINGERS ..........
DEEP INSIDE Your SOUL ...
Your Psychiatrist Must Know ... !!!
That The Men In Those White Coats
Are Ready To ... Take HOLD ...
of The ANGER That CONTROLS ...
The Way Your Thinking Rolls ...
It’s DISTURBING For Me To See ... !!!
That You CLAIM To LIKE To Read ...
SOME Poetry That Comes From Me ...
Cos’ You’re CLEARLY Quite CRAZY ... !?!?!
Is It ATTENTION That You Seek ... ?
Which Is Why You Claim That It’s ... ME ...
Who Has This ... HATEFUL STREAK ... ?!?
Well Listen Madame WHIPPED ... !!!
These Words AREN’T Witty Quips ... !!!
These Words Are Saying This ...
I Suggest That You ... DESIST ...
From Reading BIG VIRGE Scripts ... !!!!
And YES I’m ... SERIOUS ... !!!!!
I’m NOT The Type of Guy ...
With Whom You Should ...
.... Pick FIGHTS .... !!!
SUPERIOR I’m NOT ...
But I KNOW What I Have Got ...
An HONESTY That ROCKS ...
Your DIZZY Cotton Socks ...
Your Complexes EXIST ...
Because You Do Seem WHIPPED ...
WITHOUT Being ... Chained To Ships ... ?!?
So Just .....
PLEASE Keep Your Thoughts ZIPPED ... !!!
And Bitch Within YOUR Scripts ...
About These ... Mother Fuckers ... !!!
Who Clearly Prefer ... OTHERS ... !!!
And UNDERSTANDABLY So ...
When Looking At Your Quotes
Cos’ It’s ANGER That YOU Seem To HOLD ... !!!
While Words I Write Let My Anger .... GO ... !!!!!
You Need To THINK Before Making Quotes ...
And INACCURATE Statements In Your ACCUSATIONS ...
That PROVE That Your Mind ...
Is Somewhat VACANT ...
And Clearly Deals In HATRED ... !!!
So I Suggest You Stick To Your Quest ...
To Write ... Your Book ...
That’s Gonna WRITE ITSELF ... ?
Your TRIPPIN’ And Clearly Need Some Help ...
Because Whatever You Cook Needs To Stay On The Shelf ...
Because Whatever Script That You Choose To Flip ...
Is Bound To Be One of Some DIZZY Chick ...
Who Has CLEARLY Been ...
.... MENTALLY ....
............. WHIPPED ........... !!!
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