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I'll silence my breaking of me without you
Just one last request
I won't ask why...
And Promise not to cry
Please stay till the morrow
Then unlove me in the morn
With goodbye
I won't ask why...
And Promise not to cry
Please stay till the morrow
Then unlove me in the morn
With goodbye
Published 13th Sep 2020
Author's Note
Submission to "Goodbyes "competition. 31 syllables exact. Appreciated the counter link!
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13th Sep 2020 8:56am
Dear DP,
Fantastic write. In its brevity you’ve managed to capture the ache of losing love but needing just a few more precious moments. All the best in the comp. H🌷
Fantastic write. In its brevity you’ve managed to capture the ache of losing love but needing just a few more precious moments. All the best in the comp. H🌷
14th Sep 2020 9:48am
Thank you H, it's essence you've captured. I appreciate your time to comment. Fingers crossed! Mahalo🌺
15th Sep 2020 3:02pm
