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Guilty Rain

It relentlessly cascades upon me.
Each drop is sharp as a knife.
They pierce my flesh very easily.
I try to run to escape the strife.
The feelings of remorse are tearing me apart.
I can't flee from this horrible guilt.
It stings repeatedly at my heart.
I can feel myself begin to wilt.
There is no where left to go.
My mind is going manic.
The fear is beginning to show.
I'm starting to cry out in panic.
I curl up sobbing in sorrow.
There is no light, I can't see.
Is there strength I could borrow?
Hoping, praying to be free.
This endless guilty rain.
I feel it's crushing pain.
Weighing me down with a chain.
It's driving me insane!
My hope begins to wane.
Is there no liberation to gain?
Written by TheGiftedOne
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Author's Note
My first non-bullying submission. It turned out darker than I expected, so if it causes sadness to anyone I sincerely apologize. This is a compilation of my feelings put into words. Thank you.
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