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LOVE I CAN'T DENY
LOVE I CAN'T DENY
Your eyes make me adore the world.
They make two hearts play one love tune.
This tune tells me how great you are,
and tells you that you're my fortune.
They make you see how much l love,
and how my heart is no more free
as what goes on inside my heart
is in my eyes for you to see.
Your eyes show beauty of rare genre,
in shape, in touch that lives inside.
They enslave my soul ere my eyes;
the soul's love cannot be denied.
BY JOSEPH ZENIEH
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
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Your eyes make me adore the world.
They make two hearts play one love tune.
This tune tells me how great you are,
and tells you that you're my fortune.
They make you see how much l love,
and how my heart is no more free
as what goes on inside my heart
is in my eyes for you to see.
Your eyes show beauty of rare genre,
in shape, in touch that lives inside.
They enslave my soul ere my eyes;
the soul's love cannot be denied.
BY JOSEPH ZENIEH
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
____________________________________
Published 24th Aug 2020
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This is what is known on critical poetry sites as a "journal entry" since all you do here is speak in overly cliched and dull declarative language about WHAT you feel rather than showing a reader what it's like to feel what you say you feel.
