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Hello

She stood there with those gorgeous eyes
I watched her as she passed me by
She withheld such beautiful hair
She didn't know I would stare
I'd sit and ponder at her all day
Some could say I was in a daze
She didn't even know my name
But who would have thought she was to blame
I never walked up to say hi
or to even say a meaningful goodbye
Later in life she was newly wed
I sat down with my hands to my head
Cold and Defeated, I sat and wept
Late at night I cried while I slept
As I looked at my life
She could have been my wife
I threaten my body with a sharp knife
My life went by as if it was hurried
I soon discovered she was buried
All I had to do was say hi
Now all I can say is goodbye.
Written by Thor_Yirst
Published
Author's Note
I wrote this while in middle school. It' not about anybody in particular.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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