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Dear Mama
Dear Mama
The day you left my heart broke in two
On many days you were the one that carried me through
For so long I felt oh so alone
On that day the God called you home
We were so close you were my best friend
How I wish those days never had to end
Oh sure there were ups and downs between you and me
But these past 6 years have felt like an eternity
Many times I've just wanted to pick up the phone and call you
Whenever my life was a mess you always new just what to do
On those night I just lay there thinking of what you would say
How you would take me in your arms and tell me it's all going to be ok
I'll always remember how you taught mehow to love and not to hate
Remember what I said to you on that last day you've got strong girls here we'll be okay and I'll meet you at the pearly gate
The day you left my heart broke in two
On many days you were the one that carried me through
For so long I felt oh so alone
On that day the God called you home
We were so close you were my best friend
How I wish those days never had to end
Oh sure there were ups and downs between you and me
But these past 6 years have felt like an eternity
Many times I've just wanted to pick up the phone and call you
Whenever my life was a mess you always new just what to do
On those night I just lay there thinking of what you would say
How you would take me in your arms and tell me it's all going to be ok
I'll always remember how you taught mehow to love and not to hate
Remember what I said to you on that last day you've got strong girls here we'll be okay and I'll meet you at the pearly gate
Written by
Stephanie_Knapik
(Katnip-Stevie)
Published 18th Aug 2020
| Edited 20th Aug 2020
Author's Note
Today is the 6 year anniversary of my mother's passing
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Re. Dear Mama
18th Aug 2020 3:54am
Nice tribute poem to your mother. It makes very happy and sad at the same time. Keep on writing.
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18th Aug 2020 4:11am
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18th Aug 2020 8:11am
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18th Aug 2020 11:27am
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19th Aug 2020 8:36pm
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Re: Re. Dear Mama
20th Aug 2020 2:11am
Yes I did I'll fix that now. Thank you for your comment and pointing that out to me
Re. Dear Mama
20th Aug 2020 3:03am
Dear S,
I’m sorry for your loss. This is a lovely homage to your mother, who I’m sure is watching and caring for you still from above. It’s still terribly difficult to carry on no matter how long ago on some days and you reflected that lovingly. H🌷
I’m sorry for your loss. This is a lovely homage to your mother, who I’m sure is watching and caring for you still from above. It’s still terribly difficult to carry on no matter how long ago on some days and you reflected that lovingly. H🌷
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20th Aug 2020 9:23am
Thank you for your comment and yes it is hard and I think what makes it so hard is I had just lost my Dad a month and a half before that on June 29th
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21st Aug 2020 3:52am
Dear S,
A double whammy. I’m terribly sorry. You sharing this is very kind and big hearted. Thank you. H🌷
A double whammy. I’m terribly sorry. You sharing this is very kind and big hearted. Thank you. H🌷
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21st Aug 2020 4:49am
No thank you for taking the time to read my work and comment on it yes it was a double whammy. We were just waiting for the day mom went do to she had stage 4 bone cancer so we new she only had a matter of time but my dad that came out of nowhere and I was a daddy's girl so yea that one killed me then mom to go so close after that didn't in
Re. Dear Mama
Sounds like you were at least able to say goodbye, I hope. Good Mum's always know what to say, even if they don't. But you're right, it's nice to know they were at the end of a telephone. Life does indeed get lonelier the longer we live. That's a mathematical certainly I am afraid.
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23rd Aug 2020 3:46pm
That is so true so many things I wish I had done differently as a teen but as I got older my mom and I got really close
Re. Dear Mama
24th Aug 2020 10:16pm
Thank you for sharing in such a wholesome way. Parents dying leave a 'big hole' that we slowly have to learn to fill ourselves - no easy task. It sounds like she gave you some wise words to carry on with. And welcome to DUP. Best regards, Josh.
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24th Aug 2020 10:33pm
Thank you Josh and your right its never easy to lose someone, especially someone that's so close to you like a parent or best friend and in my case she was both those to me but I keep moving forward and the woman I know she would be proud of thank you for your lovely comment
Re. Dear Mama
13th Sep 2020 00:06am
A beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your mother... ❤️ Great writing with lots of emotion!
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13th Sep 2020 00:11am
Thank you for your comment she always encouraged me to do what I loved most and when I stopped writing years ago she kept trying to get me to start again so I couldn't think of a better way to honor her memory then to put in a poem