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Breakfast
Plummeting straight down
Razor sharp claws encasing
Turtle dove captured
Hungry beak rending
Gobbets of flesh devoured
Hunter now gorging
Skeletal cracking
Downy feathers fly around
Carcass disappears
Finally finished
He preens and cleans his feathers
Sharp glances and gone
Razor sharp claws encasing
Turtle dove captured
Hungry beak rending
Gobbets of flesh devoured
Hunter now gorging
Skeletal cracking
Downy feathers fly around
Carcass disappears
Finally finished
He preens and cleans his feathers
Sharp glances and gone
Published 16th Aug 2020
Author's Note
Saw this hawk feasting in my backyard this morning. When he was done only a pile of feathers remained.
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16th Aug 2020 11:28pm
Nice bold nature write ... such immediacy ... nice plump words ... "rending" ... "Gobbets" ... "preens and cleans" ... wonderful my dear Lupe ...
16th Aug 2020 11:53pm
Thank you my dear poetess, just a little set of haikus to celebrate this little majestic hunter!!
