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Holy Rollin' Ass Holiness
Holy Holy Holy
Assholiness
Like Words Spit Out From Twisted Lips
Too Tempted Not To Speak
Yet Truth Is Between The Lines
Like In A Store Buying Peanut Butter
Just To Practice Reading Too Dense Poetry
And The Shit We Say Latrine Like
When We Think No One Is Listening
Lips Smacking Mind Cracking
Like A Two By Four Over A Head
When You Can't Think Straight
And You Need A Third Shot Before You Can Get Up
Just Always Remember
We May Defecate With Our Luscious Language
But No Matter What We Say
We Are Never Very Fart Apart
Assholiness
Like Words Spit Out From Twisted Lips
Too Tempted Not To Speak
Yet Truth Is Between The Lines
Like In A Store Buying Peanut Butter
Just To Practice Reading Too Dense Poetry
And The Shit We Say Latrine Like
When We Think No One Is Listening
Lips Smacking Mind Cracking
Like A Two By Four Over A Head
When You Can't Think Straight
And You Need A Third Shot Before You Can Get Up
Just Always Remember
We May Defecate With Our Luscious Language
But No Matter What We Say
We Are Never Very Fart Apart
Published 16th Aug 2020
Author's Note
For Bukowski Competition
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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16th Aug 2020 11:29pm
16th Aug 2020 11:57pm
I hope so...he was a highly lucid crazy soul...
I remember reading some of my work in the seventies , in Berkeley , Ca.
A lot of poets loved him , from that area...
I was in awe of certain of the San Francisco , and Berkeley poets who showed up...
Then , one night , I got up on the stage , and read...
They applauded me , and some came up and shook my hand , and told me I was great...
Sadly , I lost hundreds of poems , I had written at that time...
But I remember works of his , Ginsberg , Ferlinghetti , McClure...
A whole 'nother reality !
I remember reading some of my work in the seventies , in Berkeley , Ca.
A lot of poets loved him , from that area...
I was in awe of certain of the San Francisco , and Berkeley poets who showed up...
Then , one night , I got up on the stage , and read...
They applauded me , and some came up and shook my hand , and told me I was great...
Sadly , I lost hundreds of poems , I had written at that time...
But I remember works of his , Ginsberg , Ferlinghetti , McClure...
A whole 'nother reality !
17th Aug 2020 1:22am
17th Aug 2020 3:29am
Thank You , Good Sir Harry !
No mincin' the meat of the reality ;
Just cut , dried , and clear...
With a twist , like his mind worked !
No mincin' the meat of the reality ;
Just cut , dried , and clear...
With a twist , like his mind worked !
Anonymous
17th Aug 2020 1:24am
Beautiful and painfully true❤
17th Aug 2020 3:41am
Beauty And Pain ;
Thank you , Mi'lady ;
To pass this on to you ;
Beauty And Pain = 159
Yet , most interestingly :
Point = 159
And , as those of us who have endured that ,
or given that to others understand that *is*
the "Point"...
This *Poet* I wrote this about , knew that very well...
Thank you , Mi'lady ;
To pass this on to you ;
Beauty And Pain = 159
Yet , most interestingly :
Point = 159
And , as those of us who have endured that ,
or given that to others understand that *is*
the "Point"...
This *Poet* I wrote this about , knew that very well...
17th Aug 2020 6:09am
Beautiful work, love how it is woven, like the petals of a flower, so intriguing ty
17th Aug 2020 8:24am
Many Thanks , my friend ;
The Petals Of A Black Rose ,
Dripping With Shadows Of
The Love Of The Word Heard...
Maudlin and Meddling and More
The Petals Of A Black Rose ,
Dripping With Shadows Of
The Love Of The Word Heard...
Maudlin and Meddling and More
I have never read his poetry but yours is one hell of a piece... Simply kick-ass! 👏🏻
17th Aug 2020 8:20pm
Thank You , In Dreamz , my friend !
You should check him out...
He was very raw , yet deep with simple language...
I , however , am only a beginner !
( yet determined )
You should check him out...
He was very raw , yet deep with simple language...
I , however , am only a beginner !
( yet determined )
2nd Sep 2020 00:23am
2nd Sep 2020 00:30am
