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GLIMPSES INTO YOUR LIFE
Welcome to an different kind of dimension, that will take you on a mental and physical journey between. The difference of symmetries and lines, that makes your connection a wonderful one to travel. For I know you were told when you were young, that there are something's, yes best left undiscovered by you. But yet beneath the subconscious of your young mind, you become infuse by the thought of what it could it be yet sometimes peer pressure will push you to try this thing called cocaine. Yeah take a snuff down a line of crystal powder so white as the snow, yet be aware and ready to experience a psychedelic momentarily journey. To another realm of your deep subconsciousness, with subliminal messages collaborating with your most deepest thoughts. Yet fuel by your mere young imagination of outer space adventures, created by swirling lines of Crystal pure white powder, just floating out into space in lines between space and time.
Published 16th Aug 2020
Author's Note
WHEN YOU ARE GROWING UP AS A CHILD WITHIN A WORLD THAT IS ALWAYS CHANGING, AS IT COMES WITH SO MUCH NEGATIVE THINGS JUST REACHING OUT TO YOU SO MUCH WITHIN REACH, FOR WE HAVE TO DEAL WITH PEER PRESSURE AND BULLYING TILL WE WILL DO ANYTHING, JUST TO FIT WITHIN TILL SOMETIMES IT LEADS US TO DO MORE KINDS OF DRUGS AS ADULTS REPEATING THE SAME CYCLE OF LIFE...STONEY BAY
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16th Aug 2020 5:36pm
16th Aug 2020 5:45pm
Thank you for the read and commenting I have seen so many young people get caught up in this cycle known as life even on into their adulthood as I am a witness to that fact of experience in life respect dear poetess 🙏😎
16th Aug 2020 8:56pm
I think a lot of addicts get started by peer pressure and just trying to fit in with the crowd. Good work!
16th Aug 2020 9:47pm
I have to agree with your statement peer pressure is something else to deal with for some young folks but to fit in with the crowd some would do it no matter the cost and that's sad like the song goes knowbody wants you when your down and out 🤔 respect brother poet
17th Aug 2020 5:17am
your poem (your heart and soul poured on paper, I believe it to be) is absolutely a reflection of a truly passionate person as yourself. Truly thank you
17th Aug 2020 10:14am
Thank you for the read and commenting I appreciate the support and understanding with the compliment and your right I am passionate about writing that which lives within me for it is through my experience I learn how to appreciate the feelings and emotions of strength and courage as I learn compassion and love for thyself as well as others for it use to be a time when I didn't care about thyself mentally and emotionally but yet I meet someone who understood the turmoil and confusion built up within me as they helped me to grow from within the depth of my own heart and soul and mind sadly she die before she got the opportunity to see how much I have change because of her love and understanding that she instill in the deepness of my heart and soul 🙏
18th Aug 2020 2:49am
I believe that we are actually physically apart of our environment and
like a computer we are truly programmed by it..
sometimes you can't do right because there is no right to do
Deep Stone Man
OG RESPECT
like a computer we are truly programmed by it..
sometimes you can't do right because there is no right to do
Deep Stone Man
OG RESPECT
18th Aug 2020 12:10pm
Exactly I agree wholeheartedly with your statement for when you think about it your life sometimes is an reflection of what it is destine to be yet we each have the ability to change the dimensions of our own direction as it is a choice that only we can decide 😎 much appreciated for the insight into this piece respect brother poet OG 🤛👊
18th Aug 2020 5:29pm
“we each have the ability to change the dimensions of our own direction as it is a choice that only we can decide” 🧐
word!
18th Aug 2020 6:25pm
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6th Oct 2020 10:40am
Yes indeed they are bad for it takes a lot to quit a habit that just kills you mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually as it slowly damages the people around them as they are going through this situation of drug abuse respect dear poetess 🙏😎👊👊👊
