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The glitter ball
The music is silent, the dress needs a press,
hairspray is old now, friends are elsewhere.
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The ball is a memory, just like hopes of the dates,
no spritzer to calm me, no hugs for the heart.
Published 15th Aug 2020
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15th Aug 2020 11:44am
15th Aug 2020 9:12pm
16th Aug 2020 7:22am
no spritzer to calm me, no hugs for the heart.
This line is so perfectly darted.
Right on the point and conveys the message clear. Keep up the good work.
This line is so perfectly darted.
Right on the point and conveys the message clear. Keep up the good work.
19th Aug 2020 10:22am
Oh gosh, you made me feel emotional with your comment! Thank you thank you!!!
