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Should we go too?
To a place where fireflies roam
And birds rule the earth.
There I'll see you again soon
Underneath the gentle moonlight
Waiting the dawn.
Oh, We'll write our names in the sky
Whisper gentle breaths
And bid our goodbyes.
And birds rule the earth.
There I'll see you again soon
Underneath the gentle moonlight
Waiting the dawn.
Oh, We'll write our names in the sky
Whisper gentle breaths
And bid our goodbyes.
Published 14th Aug 2020
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14th Aug 2020 3:28pm
Dear ET,
What a lovely gentle write this is. I was quite taken with this phrase “ Oh, We'll write our names in the sky
Whisper gentle breaths
And bid our goodbyes.“ it has an eternal quality that surpasses any boundary of love. Great write. H🌷
What a lovely gentle write this is. I was quite taken with this phrase “ Oh, We'll write our names in the sky
Whisper gentle breaths
And bid our goodbyes.“ it has an eternal quality that surpasses any boundary of love. Great write. H🌷
27th Aug 2020 10:05am
Thank you Honoria.
Glad you, and the others liked it! I honestly appreciate it
Glad you, and the others liked it! I honestly appreciate it
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