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False Sunshine
Where does the impostor end?
Will I ever know what I'm feeling inside?
Thought the journey through the cave was over
Time for the sunshine.
Guess I was wrong
Just playing make believe with false rainbows and pots of gold.
Sober It was supposed to be ok
Only drunk I realize its all a shit show.
Fuck it all. Ya know?
Will I ever know what I'm feeling inside?
Thought the journey through the cave was over
Time for the sunshine.
Guess I was wrong
Just playing make believe with false rainbows and pots of gold.
Sober It was supposed to be ok
Only drunk I realize its all a shit show.
Fuck it all. Ya know?
Published 4th Aug 2020
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16th Aug 2020 5:59pm
Dear P,
Your sense of timing and rhythm describing a very real and sensitive subject is laser focused. Your reader can feel the frustration in this write and it’s very relatable. It makes me consider my own situation and want to know when and how does this story play out? H🌷
Your sense of timing and rhythm describing a very real and sensitive subject is laser focused. Your reader can feel the frustration in this write and it’s very relatable. It makes me consider my own situation and want to know when and how does this story play out? H🌷
20th Aug 2020 6:25pm
2nd Oct 2020 3:32pm
