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The Real
What is air
I scarce breath
I miss the smell of you
Babe
I miss the touch of you
Who holds my heart
Empty
I miss the taste
Of love
The want
I miss all of you
You don't know what goes through my head
People such as you can't exist or else magic would be real
I miss the magic
The real
I scarce breath
I miss the smell of you
Babe
I miss the touch of you
Who holds my heart
Empty
I miss the taste
Of love
The want
I miss all of you
You don't know what goes through my head
People such as you can't exist or else magic would be real
I miss the magic
The real
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Re. The Real
29th Jul 2020 1:23pm
I hope she truly knows what goes through your head; simply because, you’re open and transparent with her whilst telling her such things, without a filter. No doubt, she’ll love you even more for such honesty.
Love the vulnerability in this one...🔥
Love the vulnerability in this one...🔥
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29th Jul 2020 11:23pm
My mother told me I was built for endurance not speed.
My father told me I was a tough person to love.
I don't think either one lied.
I'm an acquired taste.
My father told me I was a tough person to love.
I don't think either one lied.
I'm an acquired taste.
Re. The Real
29th Jul 2020 1:25pm
I can relate to this piece on so many levels as I have witness these feelings so long ago yet it still feels like yesterday I am just grateful that I moved on to find someone who understands the true meaning of what is called love nicely composed brother...respect
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Re: Re. The Real
29th Jul 2020 11:14pm
We all go through these emotions at one time or another. I'm glad you've found someone on the level. You've learned to call things for what they are. Experience burns but in the end it's a blessing.
Thank you my friend
Thank you my friend
Re: Re. The Real
30th Jul 2020 00:09am
You are so right on point with that statement 🤗respect brother poet keep that home fire always burning 🙏🤛
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30th Jul 2020 00:31am
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30th Jul 2020 3:59pm
Re. The Real
Well this punches. Good job, A. I've needed to park it, it's like sticking fingers in something that throbs anyway. I hope you are well and safe where you are.
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29th Jul 2020 11:02pm
It's quiet, country in my little corner of South Carolina. Nothing much happens here. I think I need an adventure.
Truth be told, I've wondered about you in all my trying to read between lines you write.
Truth be told, I've wondered about you in all my trying to read between lines you write.
Re. The Real
30th Jul 2020 5:07am
Dear AJ,
You manage to write pieces of beauty even in the midst of personal loss. I find I’m at a crossroads to express to you how sorry I am to read this. I wish I had magic words to help you feel better. Would you accept virtual hugs in lieu of anything intelligent to offer? H🌷
You manage to write pieces of beauty even in the midst of personal loss. I find I’m at a crossroads to express to you how sorry I am to read this. I wish I had magic words to help you feel better. Would you accept virtual hugs in lieu of anything intelligent to offer? H🌷
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30th Jul 2020 9:56am