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CAN YOU SEE MY TEARS???
Feeling a dark lonely past
Running fears in your mind so fast
Shadows chase you to last....
Escaping with chains intact....
Tolerating so much pain...
From people that abused you in vain...
A mother without no shame...
Baby lets dance in the rain....
A long river you want to follow
Guiding you to steer your sorrow
Thirsting it to want to swallow...
What is waiting for tomorrow???.....
I want to help you sober....
(For you)
I want to make it over
(For you)
Your body is getting older.....
Can you see my tears
I want to drink your lips
(For you)
That carries still the drips
(For you)
Of your poison that continues in sips...
X2 Can you see my tears????
A boy that never cried
Many times he obediently tried....
Years and years kept in silent, tied....
Where's that innocent child????
Some things wont ever change...
With forgiveness, some black hearts remain the same....
Drinking away to forget who to blame
Baby why you hang me up????
Can you please stop????
I want to help you sober....
(For you)
I want to make it over
(For you)
Your body is getting older.....
Can you see my tears????
I want to drink your lips
(For you)
That carries still the drips
(For you)
Of your poison that continues in sips...
X2 Can you see my tears????
(Slow tempo)
A long river you want to follow
Guiding you to steer your sorrow
Thirsting it to want to swallow...
What is waiting for tomorrow???.....
Running fears in your mind so fast
Shadows chase you to last....
Escaping with chains intact....
Tolerating so much pain...
From people that abused you in vain...
A mother without no shame...
Baby lets dance in the rain....
A long river you want to follow
Guiding you to steer your sorrow
Thirsting it to want to swallow...
What is waiting for tomorrow???.....
I want to help you sober....
(For you)
I want to make it over
(For you)
Your body is getting older.....
Can you see my tears
I want to drink your lips
(For you)
That carries still the drips
(For you)
Of your poison that continues in sips...
X2 Can you see my tears????
A boy that never cried
Many times he obediently tried....
Years and years kept in silent, tied....
Where's that innocent child????
Some things wont ever change...
With forgiveness, some black hearts remain the same....
Drinking away to forget who to blame
Baby why you hang me up????
Can you please stop????
I want to help you sober....
(For you)
I want to make it over
(For you)
Your body is getting older.....
Can you see my tears????
I want to drink your lips
(For you)
That carries still the drips
(For you)
Of your poison that continues in sips...
X2 Can you see my tears????
(Slow tempo)
A long river you want to follow
Guiding you to steer your sorrow
Thirsting it to want to swallow...
What is waiting for tomorrow???.....
Published 24th Jul 2020
Author's Note
A SONG I WROTE DEDICATED TO SOMEONE I'M TALKING TO THAT IS ADDICTED TO ALCOHOL AND IS TRYING TO STOP BUT IS HARD FOR HIM. SO WROTE THIS HOPING IT WILL HELP HIM REFLECT SOME AND TRY HELPING HIM MAKE A CHANGE. CAUSE I AM SAD AND WORRIED FOR HIM.
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24th Jul 2020 6:39am
24th Jul 2020 4:28pm
Thank you so much. I love it as i try singing it and hope i can one day get music to it. Yes ill try hard to get him to hear uplifting words to help him. Thank you so much again...
24th Jul 2020 10:29am
This is a very enlightening and powerful spill of depth and deepness within the equation of the mind and heart and soul I hope he hears you speak to him for it is not only him drowning in the abyss of the darkness it is you as well poetess respect dear poetess
24th Jul 2020 4:34pm
Thank you so much stoney... It is very strong and painful at same time. Cause when u care for someone and cant seem to it hurts more. They have to try too. Its not easy but im there trying to help him. Thank you for liking this and hope one day you can hear how its sang....
24th Jul 2020 8:31pm
All we can do is be there for them the rest is up to them is it most be a subconscious decision for it has to be there first walk towards recovery for so often they truly don't really understand what they are doing to those who believe in them as we only want the best for them cause we truly care about there well being all you can do is support them on their journey respect dear poetess
24th Jul 2020 9:11pm
Yes very true, i can only be there and hope he makes that effort to change. Thanks for great words... 🙂
24th Jul 2020 9:30pm
25th Jul 2020 8:24pm
25th Jul 2020 8:54pm
Thank you he means alot to me and young too. When he is sweet he shows that side but he then shows his dark side too and it is depressing to see but im trying to be there for him. May God open his eyes one day.
26th Jul 2020 9:59am
26th Jul 2020 11:25pm
