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was flat out on the sofa looking at my wife was reading my every glance was turning the pages flowed through her fingers I did
Published 21st Jul 2020
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21st Jul 2020 2:53am
Ha! A.ha! I read this all the way through and knew exactly when to stop and start. Well done! The form fits the content perfectly, being it's difficult to know where one starts and the other ends.
