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Restricting Our Designs

Restricting our designs
our freedom
to choose
How
to communicate

To form the feeling
to form the rhythm
that plays on the nerves
of those
who believe
their not blind
just thoughts
from our head
lovinly applied
in pain
sometimes

Formed into words
the freedom to choose
How
to communicate

How to design
how to apply
which words to use
that will play on the nerves
of those
who believe
their not blind

Like a sculpture
who doesn't see
just a block
of mere words
but a strong feeling
that there is
a rhythm
within the words
that must be applied
to ride with the rhyme
our feelings
have designed
to bring out
the hidden meanings
that the words
try to hide


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