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Will She Ever Know?
Will she ever know what her existence does to me?
Shattering the chains, she sets me free.
Will she ever know how exquisite her smile is?
Anticipating the day, when she will say "it's only his".
Will she ever know the way I'm swept off my feet when she passes by?
Even when my feet is on deck, She makes me fly high.
Will she ever know that she is the finest thing ever happened?
She aint around? I am deeply saddened.
Will she ever know that she is the cause to my smile everyday?
Yes definitely she can make my world sway!
Will she ever know that it pierce my heart when I imagine losing her?
It keeps on buzzing, and it begins to stir.
Will she ever know how much I love her?
She got the power to make my visionary world blur.
Shattering the chains, she sets me free.
Will she ever know how exquisite her smile is?
Anticipating the day, when she will say "it's only his".
Will she ever know the way I'm swept off my feet when she passes by?
Even when my feet is on deck, She makes me fly high.
Will she ever know that she is the finest thing ever happened?
She aint around? I am deeply saddened.
Will she ever know that she is the cause to my smile everyday?
Yes definitely she can make my world sway!
Will she ever know that it pierce my heart when I imagine losing her?
It keeps on buzzing, and it begins to stir.
Will she ever know how much I love her?
She got the power to make my visionary world blur.
Published 19th Jul 2020
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20th Jul 2020 7:29am
Nice rhyming couplets ... great flow ... also love the repetition ... thundering ... relentless ...
20th Jul 2020 10:48am
2nd Aug 2020 2:06pm
Great writing! You got some skills for sure. This has me thinking of my best friend whom I'm love dearly and am in love with and that can be a good thing or a bad thing but even though i wonder if she knows of course she does even if I think i'm doing a good job trying to keep it secret. Woman know. I could be in trouble. I hope not, lol. Enjoyed
2nd Aug 2020 3:13pm
I would suggest you to express it my friend. Its never too late. Dont be scared of rejections. Life is all about moving forward. Thank you once again for your feedback. It matters and helps me keep up with inking. Thank you.
