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Pretty Butterfly (haiku)
Pretty butterfly
Flying low among the plants
Ends in a Cat's mouth
Wings flutter wildly
Hanging between two sharp fangs
Like a black moustache
Flying low among the plants
Ends in a Cat's mouth
Wings flutter wildly
Hanging between two sharp fangs
Like a black moustache
Published 11th Jul 2020
Author's Note
This morning I saw one of the cats running with a black butterfly in its mouth. I was surprised. The butterfly was trying to free itself. I have observed the cats chasing butterflies that flits around the house when they sit on the grass. This morning one of them finally caught a butterfly.
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11th Jul 2020 7:32pm
Wow! That is rare indeed. These are great little haikus, summer. The pivot is riveting in each one.
11th Jul 2020 7:41pm
Thanks dear Ahavati🌹❤ it was my first time to see it. I was surprised and tried to stop the cat to let the butterfly out but it ran away.
11th Jul 2020 8:10pm
This is a creatively subtle snapshot of the beauty and fragility of life and cycles of nature for me. Great work.
12th Jul 2020 10:04pm
12th Jul 2020 00:28am
Dear S,
One forgets the brutality of nature amidst its beauty. Odd how well it can be hidden in plain sight. Funny, I didn’t know cats ate butterflies. Very well penned my friend! H🌷
One forgets the brutality of nature amidst its beauty. Odd how well it can be hidden in plain sight. Funny, I didn’t know cats ate butterflies. Very well penned my friend! H🌷
12th Jul 2020 10:08pm
Yes dear H, Cats have that nature even if they are domesticated. Once I saw a cat ate a small snake. They also chase birds and eat them when they get a chance. Thank you for stopping your comments. 🌹❤
12th Jul 2020 9:43pm
12th Jul 2020 10:03pm
will you be entertained by that sight? How can you find a thing like that as entertaining? 🤔
