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goodbye woman, hello lonesome drifter
drifting charcoal flowers
invade smiling dreams
nectar of bittersweet corruption
tasted
fuel for
the old rusty blues
and twilight
turns her face
into night
a wolf's paw
burned up into
the deepest reaches
of the sky
riding a freight
train
against a backdrop
of soulstreaming stars
sitting
on top
of the world
again
invade smiling dreams
nectar of bittersweet corruption
tasted
fuel for
the old rusty blues
and twilight
turns her face
into night
a wolf's paw
burned up into
the deepest reaches
of the sky
riding a freight
train
against a backdrop
of soulstreaming stars
sitting
on top
of the world
again
Published 4th Jul 2020
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17th Aug 2020 11:55pm
Dear V,
For me this piece vacillates between the love For her and her beauty and his angst and despair at losing it. “ a wolf's paw
burned up into
the deepest reaches
of the sky ” I found this an interesting image that worked well with the loss of love. Nice job. H🌷
For me this piece vacillates between the love For her and her beauty and his angst and despair at losing it. “ a wolf's paw
burned up into
the deepest reaches
of the sky ” I found this an interesting image that worked well with the loss of love. Nice job. H🌷
