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The Chills
Numb is a mental tundra
of cold thoughts.
The past frozen in such a way
that it beams and reflects
a slushy ice onto the soul.
of cold thoughts.
The past frozen in such a way
that it beams and reflects
a slushy ice onto the soul.
Published 2nd Jul 2020
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2nd Jul 2020 12:56pm
the inner rhymes & piercing meanings & stark juxtaposed imagery & words run hands in hand in all striking brevity.. it like each time a piece & peace of soul, hearty dusts in (e)motional chaos , mind~ bits of petrified to greyly waethering to gathering & whatnots... I feel the inner One voice in this dreadly flesh & births we dance... you set high standards beating your inimitable self each time dear Nik, adored Poetess.. write on shine on, light & love x:)
2nd Jul 2020 11:19pm
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2nd Jul 2020 10:46pm
Firstly , Lady Nikki , beautiful image , with a beautiful poem...
Deep , yet stark...
Now , you know me a little by now...LOL
So here is something I may add ;
Numb = 66
Interestingly , 66 is the sum of 1 to 11...
1 + 2 + 3 + 4... ( to 11 )
If you fold a twenty two letter system , you have
two columns of eleven symbols each column ;
Yet :
Ice = 67
So , Numb = 66 , Ice = 67 ?
Yes , it does...;)
And interestingly :
Soul = 76
Hmmm...
Ice = 67
Soul = 76
Yes , it does...LOL !
Deep , yet stark...
Now , you know me a little by now...LOL
So here is something I may add ;
Numb = 66
Interestingly , 66 is the sum of 1 to 11...
1 + 2 + 3 + 4... ( to 11 )
If you fold a twenty two letter system , you have
two columns of eleven symbols each column ;
Yet :
Ice = 67
So , Numb = 66 , Ice = 67 ?
Yes , it does...;)
And interestingly :
Soul = 76
Hmmm...
Ice = 67
Soul = 76
Yes , it does...LOL !
2nd Jul 2020 11:21pm
Thabk you Blackwolf,
How cool and unintentional
but hiw everything just adds up perfectly.
How cool and unintentional
but hiw everything just adds up perfectly.
