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she smiled.. again
entering an amusement park,
we both chose the middle aisle
i stopped and said “ladies go first”
it was a single file,
then.. there was a spark
in the form of a smile,
a pilot was lit..
that had been out for a while,
pink stick and lite shadow
i like a subtle style,
a 9 out of a 10
on my eye appeal dial..
i knew she couldn’t be single,
there’s no way that I could win,
I ask “you with someone..
aren’t you with a friend”
“Yes” she said “i’m with someone”..
i thought that was the end,
“i’m with my cousin” she said
“she is like my best friend”,
she asked “who are you with..
you with someone too”,
i replied “i was alone”..
“maybe an early trip home
but now I’m with both of you”,
she turned her head and tilted it up..
to get a better view..
she smiled.. again..
which turned into a grin,
that’s when I positively knew
we both chose the middle aisle
i stopped and said “ladies go first”
it was a single file,
then.. there was a spark
in the form of a smile,
a pilot was lit..
that had been out for a while,
pink stick and lite shadow
i like a subtle style,
a 9 out of a 10
on my eye appeal dial..
i knew she couldn’t be single,
there’s no way that I could win,
I ask “you with someone..
aren’t you with a friend”
“Yes” she said “i’m with someone”..
i thought that was the end,
“i’m with my cousin” she said
“she is like my best friend”,
she asked “who are you with..
you with someone too”,
i replied “i was alone”..
“maybe an early trip home
but now I’m with both of you”,
she turned her head and tilted it up..
to get a better view..
she smiled.. again..
which turned into a grin,
that’s when I positively knew
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