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It's an adaptation from a Persian Mathnawi - I want to practice other forms - I will write a better one soon
29th Jun 2020 9:34pm
OK cool it's good to step out of the norm showing different styles of writing you did this piece justice respect dear poetess wink with a smile
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Your sonnets were always full blaze, but I like this new style on your page. Ultra sexy, SO!♨️💫
(My muse even rhymes in comments, ugh.)
(My muse even rhymes in comments, ugh.)
it's a blesséd curse
at least it helps each verse; let's
hope it gets no worse
at least it helps each verse; let's
hope it gets no worse
16th Jul 2020 6:16am
A mighty fellatrice of poetry thou art. Lovely and deep like the womanly art of pleasuring you paint with words.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
