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The Hell of Who?
there once is a life twas just cant see
from the deths of hell came to be
forming of a dark hiden place
suroud by fire in every space.
smooches and kissis will lead to hell
hiddin in darkness no one could tell.
evil, hole, and hull come from the same root
to look apone satans hellion boot.
just that simple wish to sell your soul.
to play apone his evil role.
so theologians got into the act
were hell no longer became a miyth of fact.
The Goddess of Hel from the Norse mythology
Became Satan, hero of most eschatology.
the darkness from his incendiary eyes.
told only a story to you full of lies.
the way his world is braud and wide.
evilness surrounds us no longer it hide
there once is a life twas just cant see
from the deths of hell came to be
so theologians got into the act
were hell no longer became a miyth of fact.
The Goddess of Hel from the Norse mythology
Became Satan, hero of most eschatology
-Kumiko Yamamoto
from the deths of hell came to be
forming of a dark hiden place
suroud by fire in every space.
smooches and kissis will lead to hell
hiddin in darkness no one could tell.
evil, hole, and hull come from the same root
to look apone satans hellion boot.
just that simple wish to sell your soul.
to play apone his evil role.
so theologians got into the act
were hell no longer became a miyth of fact.
The Goddess of Hel from the Norse mythology
Became Satan, hero of most eschatology.
the darkness from his incendiary eyes.
told only a story to you full of lies.
the way his world is braud and wide.
evilness surrounds us no longer it hide
there once is a life twas just cant see
from the deths of hell came to be
so theologians got into the act
were hell no longer became a miyth of fact.
The Goddess of Hel from the Norse mythology
Became Satan, hero of most eschatology
-Kumiko Yamamoto
Written by
AlexnEmoLand
(RevolutionOfAlex)
Published 20th Jan 2012
| Edited 21st Feb 2012
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Love It ....
Anonymous
20th Jan 2012 00:27am
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re: Love It ....
20th Jan 2012 00:38am
re: re: Love It ....
22nd Feb 2012 6:24pm
I believe satan is women as well... lucipheria lol
Great poem, I loved the visuals
Great poem, I loved the visuals
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i...i dont understand..
20th Jan 2012 00:40am
re: i...i dont understand..
20th Jan 2012 00:57am
DIFFERENT
20th Jan 2012 00:41am
I REALLY LIKED IT ...LOVE READING ENTRIGUING THINGS AND DAT WAS...VERY NICE JOB
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re: DIFFERENT
20th Jan 2012 00:58am
cool
20th Jan 2012 00:43am
re: cool
20th Jan 2012 00:58am
powerless.....
20th Jan 2012 00:44am
oh what a great read & write
your words offer so much insight
satan the prince of darkness...be he woman or man
can have absolutely no power if we just Follow His Plan
& His Plan Is Simply Love....nothing more nothing less
& only with His Plan can we live a Life free of stress....
your words offer so much insight
satan the prince of darkness...be he woman or man
can have absolutely no power if we just Follow His Plan
& His Plan Is Simply Love....nothing more nothing less
& only with His Plan can we live a Life free of stress....
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re: powerless.....
20th Jan 2012 00:59am
Spell check
20th Jan 2012 2:59am
It seems that it was liked by others but... in just the first few lines i ran into enough mis spells n grammar crashes that i lost interest.. Quick! don't scare your audience away with petty mistakes! K.I.S.S.
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re: Spell check
20th Jan 2012 8:05pm
DIFFERENT
Anonymous
20th Jan 2012 3:17am
good job something new
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re: DIFFERENT
20th Jan 2012 7:47pm
hero of most eschatology
20th Jan 2012 6:47pm
re: hero of most eschatology
20th Jan 2012 8:04pm
the truth
21st Jan 2012 1:49am
evil is all around us and so many of us are faling into darkness. Very well put i like it
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re: the truth
21st Jan 2012 5:42am
good job
23rd Jan 2012 11:56am
i really like this it's deep girl you keep doing what your doing i love your work
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re: good job
23rd Jan 2012 3:05pm
Reference Satan
23rd Jan 2012 2:24pm
When language was limited and knowledge also .. What is now known as The ego .. people called it Satan ... Think a little bit about it ... Bruce
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re: Reference Satan
25th Jan 2012 00:58am
nice
4th Feb 2012 8:33pm
re: nice
5th Feb 2012 1:18am
re: 0.o
8th Mar 2012 5:56am
Amazing............
9th Mar 2012 8:07am
re: Amazing............
10th Mar 2012 7:28am
re: re: Amazing............
10th Mar 2012 8:58am