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Cutter
In a dark room
Alone
with my thoughts
As my mind
Unwinds
& twists
into knots
Caught up
& tangled
I dangle un-safe
Struggling
to handle
This battle
with faith
I just want
to fall
& find out
for my self
If I can
Evolve
with out
Crying
for help
Seeking advice
with out
saying a word
Risking this
Lyfe
for a chance
to be heard
I yell
I'm not crazy
as I continue
to bleed
Don't
try to save me
I wish to be
Free
These wounds
can still take
Me
to where
I should be
& no one can
Blame me
for wanting to
Leave...
Alone
with my thoughts
As my mind
Unwinds
& twists
into knots
Caught up
& tangled
I dangle un-safe
Struggling
to handle
This battle
with faith
I just want
to fall
& find out
for my self
If I can
Evolve
with out
Crying
for help
Seeking advice
with out
saying a word
Risking this
Lyfe
for a chance
to be heard
I yell
I'm not crazy
as I continue
to bleed
Don't
try to save me
I wish to be
Free
These wounds
can still take
Me
to where
I should be
& no one can
Blame me
for wanting to
Leave...
Published 19th Jan 2012
| Edited 31st Jul 2014
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20th Jan 2012 00:07am
11th Jan 2014 3:54pm
Anonymous
20th Jan 2012 00:56am
The falling of the words in its presentation and the tone of your emotion is well portrayed. Good job
20th Jan 2012 5:53pm
21st Jan 2012 00:06am
21st Jan 2012 7:28pm
Oh dear cutter
Yes this is the best sucidal poem I have read this far dark and evil indeed.
Yes this is the best sucidal poem I have read this far dark and evil indeed.
22nd Jan 2012 00:31am
YEAH i REALLY ENJOY IT ALOT! THE IRONY IS I HAVE NEVER FELT SUICIDAL...:) ALOT OF MY STUFF IS THIRD PERSON OBSERVATION! I RECOGNIZE THAT PERSONS EMOTION AND THEN RUN MY MIND THROUGH THE MOTIONS OF THEIR STRIFE. IT GIVES ME UNLIMITED DIRECTIONS TO PUSH MY WORK.
