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A single ray of sun could light a room
Why is it that when one storm cloud covers the sun and just a small ray of light beams through the cloud, all we see is a storm? It's like we know there is light, we just don't feel like its enough.
Published 6th Jun 2020
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6th Jun 2020 7:55pm
Wow ... this speaks volumes ... elegant simplicity ... great flow ... echoes ...
6th Jun 2020 9:45pm
7th Jun 2020 10:34am
Dear M,
Wonderfully thoughtful piece. I echo the above comments.
I often think humans are genetically wire at times to just fall into that mode of not accentuating the positives. Your poem is a beautiful reminder to find that ray no matter how tiny a sliver it is and look at its potential. Lovely write. H🌷
Wonderfully thoughtful piece. I echo the above comments.
I often think humans are genetically wire at times to just fall into that mode of not accentuating the positives. Your poem is a beautiful reminder to find that ray no matter how tiny a sliver it is and look at its potential. Lovely write. H🌷
If you add in the lightning, it should be enough, hopefully.
You know the sunlight will return one day anyhow. :-)
You know the sunlight will return one day anyhow. :-)
