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The Devils Domain
God is not here…
In the midst of mans’ wicked deeds,
acts of violence that precedes,
unspeakable cruelty, it succeeds.
God is not here…
Trekking through blood and gore
the mindless brutality
of a godless horde.
God is not here…
Grasping my churchless faith,
battling the immorality of this place,
I Clamor for the means to escape.
God is not here…
My plea’s fall on deaf ears,
unspoken prayers full of fear,
are silent in this frontier.
God is not here…
An unnatural silence tonight,
a foreboding ignites,
signal fight or flight.
God is not here…
Evil has drawn near,
It whispers in my ear;
a living darkness that breads fear.
God is not here…
I regroup and close my eyes
Inner peace begins to rise
my faith is surmised.
God is not here…
He...he is within me; his disguise…
Gypsy red
Jan.2012
In the midst of mans’ wicked deeds,
acts of violence that precedes,
unspeakable cruelty, it succeeds.
God is not here…
Trekking through blood and gore
the mindless brutality
of a godless horde.
God is not here…
Grasping my churchless faith,
battling the immorality of this place,
I Clamor for the means to escape.
God is not here…
My plea’s fall on deaf ears,
unspoken prayers full of fear,
are silent in this frontier.
God is not here…
An unnatural silence tonight,
a foreboding ignites,
signal fight or flight.
God is not here…
Evil has drawn near,
It whispers in my ear;
a living darkness that breads fear.
God is not here…
I regroup and close my eyes
Inner peace begins to rise
my faith is surmised.
God is not here…
He...he is within me; his disguise…
Gypsy red
Jan.2012
Published 17th Jan 2012
| Edited 18th Jan 2012
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18th Jan 2012 00:07am
I love this poem!! If you want you should check out www.originalpoetry.org, a great site to find amazing poetry
18th Jan 2012 00:14am
Thank you Marco for reading my piece and commenting, glad you enjoyed it.
gypsy red
gypsy red
18th Jan 2012 1:15am
To have so many things hidden from the world, and only to us they exsist. Great form of monotheism for only seeing one GOD and not the fallen as one. As always a work of art. CLAP CLAP
18th Jan 2012 5:33pm
Yes my friend only to us do they exist, thank you so much for your encouraging comments and you continuous support. I am both humbled and happy you enjoy it.Thank you
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
18th Jan 2012 2:06am
18th Jan 2012 5:35pm
Thanks but, "Keep up the good work man(MAN)??? I am not a man friend I am a lady. But I am glad you enjoyed my piece.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
21st Jan 2012 11:30pm
22nd Jan 2012 2:49pm
18th Jan 2012 5:56pm
this is truly beautiful Gypsy..loved the surprise ending admist all the evil we endure yes you are a mighty warrior with God shining through you..peace Crim :)
18th Jan 2012 7:21pm
Thank you so much Crim, as always you have a positive outlook and comment, your the coolest.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
2nd Mar 2012 3:30pm
Love the concept of "spirituality is within". The "God is not here..." phrase really kept reading till the end. Great format and flow.
2nd Mar 2012 3:30pm
2nd Mar 2012 3:40pm
Thank you so very much, your grasp of the meaning and concept is on point, glad you enjoyed this piece.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
24th Jun 2012 4:11pm
HE is not silent; we aren't listening...
I like your worldview! And your writing.
I like your worldview! And your writing.
You, Soul; are absolutly right. I am a soldier, so I speak from where I have been and seen. In the midst of such carnage and evil you forget or fail to see goodness and grace. God is not in any particular place he is always within us no matter where we are if we have faith.Thank you so much for reading this and forgive me if it was too raw.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
15th Mar 2013 10:50pm
Nicely done. You've shown the epitome of the dark recesses of our spooky hearts.
16th Mar 2013 00:01am
