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Pleasing perfumed warmth
interwoven in the course of
colorful forbidden fantasies
we share one sweet moment
in the slowly sliding silence
expelled from the reality
of whispering your name.
interwoven in the course of
colorful forbidden fantasies
we share one sweet moment
in the slowly sliding silence
expelled from the reality
of whispering your name.
Published 31st May 2020
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13th Jun 2020 8:42pm
I love the alliteration in the last stanza. The entire thing is just beautiful. Good luck in the competition you’ve posted it In!
Also....
expelled from the reality of whispering your name
Lovely!
Also....
expelled from the reality of whispering your name
Lovely!
13th Jun 2020 9:13pm
Oh thanks!
Most of the times I am trying to catch feelings and moods giving words an unexplored meaning.
Most of the times I am trying to catch feelings and moods giving words an unexplored meaning.
16th Jun 2020 6:47pm
17th Jun 2020 2:32am
