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Static and Dust
the darkest parts of me
concealed in bloody bricks and mortar
are slowly turning to static and dust
breathing builds up electricity
dirt is collecting
what if i just pulled the plug...
and stopped working?
i suppose the static and dust would be there, but no longer moving.
concealed in bloody bricks and mortar
are slowly turning to static and dust
breathing builds up electricity
dirt is collecting
what if i just pulled the plug...
and stopped working?
i suppose the static and dust would be there, but no longer moving.
Published 29th May 2020
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3rd Jun 2020 5:12pm
I know the feeling... And you've expressed it in a beautifully poetic way, despite the dark subject matter. I really hope you feel better... I've been depressed as well. The craziness in this world gets to me, a lot. I wrote a poem on similar subject matter if you're interested, called "Captain Cowardice".
Anyway, keep up the writing *hugs*
Anyway, keep up the writing *hugs*
