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Petrichor
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Your tender words fell upon me
like soothing drops of first rain
after a long dry
summer spell;
gently seeping into my being
fusing with my soul
A captivating fragrance
(So earthy
... yet heavenly)
arising... pirouetting
suffusing the trees, flowers
rivers and valleys...
and then lingering forever
in the air
everywhere...
locked in the arms of time
(y)our love
—aah a sweet petrichor
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Your tender words fell upon me
like soothing drops of first rain
after a long dry
summer spell;
gently seeping into my being
fusing with my soul
A captivating fragrance
(So earthy
... yet heavenly)
arising... pirouetting
suffusing the trees, flowers
rivers and valleys...
and then lingering forever
in the air
everywhere...
locked in the arms of time
(y)our love
—aah a sweet petrichor
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
25th May 2020 5:59pm
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Re: Re. Petrichor
25th May 2020 6:08pm
Such wonderful review coming from a poet of great calibre, means a lot to me. Glad to see this piece making to your RL. :)
P.S. I hope that poem is still on dup.
P.S. I hope that poem is still on dup.
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
26th May 2020 1:48am
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26th May 2020 12:26pm
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26th May 2020 2:31am
Re. Petrichor
26th May 2020 4:07am
Very nice and loving and pationate I loced it very much. If you get a chance check out loves inferno it is my second poem I ever wrote I think you will like it very much as well
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26th May 2020 4:11am
Re. Petrichor
26th May 2020 10:37am
This is fantastic ... stunning ... the flow amazing ... so uplifting ... straight to the RL ...
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Re: Re. Petrichor
26th May 2020 1:53pm
Thanks a bunch for your continued kind support. So honoured by the RL add. 😊🌷
Re. Petrichor
26th May 2020 7:57pm
O wow - this is often how i feel when i get a electrical warm feeling while communing with Gaia's keep.
Beautiful and beautifully crafted spill
Beautiful and beautifully crafted spill
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Re: Re. Petrichor
26th May 2020 9:07pm
I'm so glad that this piece could evoke such feelings.
I'm so overwhelmed as well as flattered by your constant support. It's so encouraging. And I'm so very honoured by the RL add. 😊
I'm so overwhelmed as well as flattered by your constant support. It's so encouraging. And I'm so very honoured by the RL add. 😊
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Anonymous
13th Jun 2020 2:58pm
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Re: Re. Petrichor
13th Jun 2020 7:33pm
Your wonderful comment has left me in seventh heaven! Thanks a bunch, dear poetess for exploring my work and adding them to your reading list. Very much appreciated. 😊🌷
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
20th Jul 2022 8:51am
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Re: Re. Petrichor
20th Jul 2022 9:10am
Thank you so much, dear Danny 😊
Such lovely n kind words ... I'm all over the moon, dear poet 😊
Not in love that time... All imagination 😊
Such lovely n kind words ... I'm all over the moon, dear poet 😊
Not in love that time... All imagination 😊
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
20th Jul 2022 9:32am
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