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this life
I made more people happy…
than I made sad;
learned to be happy
with what I had…
Was taught not to take life
too seriously…
What's the point, after all;
It's like Christianity…
Their Bible's... a wonder...with it
you can prove
opposing viewpoints and
political moves…
than I made sad;
learned to be happy
with what I had…
Was taught not to take life
too seriously…
What's the point, after all;
It's like Christianity…
Their Bible's... a wonder...with it
you can prove
opposing viewpoints and
political moves…
Published 22nd May 2020
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22nd May 2020 8:10am
22nd May 2020 5:59pm
Dear E,
What a sweet and you’re quite right- hopeful write. I’ve never thought of this but your write has put me to mind keeping a list of how many times during the day I provide a goodness to another person as opposed to a not so goodness. Of course, it’s important in the spirit of self awareness to note I’m lazy. So I might not do it but I’m loving your piece. And that’s no lazy smoke. 😊H 🌷
What a sweet and you’re quite right- hopeful write. I’ve never thought of this but your write has put me to mind keeping a list of how many times during the day I provide a goodness to another person as opposed to a not so goodness. Of course, it’s important in the spirit of self awareness to note I’m lazy. So I might not do it but I’m loving your piece. And that’s no lazy smoke. 😊H 🌷
23rd May 2020 5:55pm
