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When Their Eyes Meet Again
God or the fates lead you
to that place,
they knew you would help.
Fear.
It had you.
Eyes were locked,
then you just left.
Free will, she assumed.
Blurs and things floating.
Are you consumed?
all those things you didn't do?
Are you guilty or free?
Do you think about her?
She always thinks about you.
to that place,
they knew you would help.
Fear.
It had you.
Eyes were locked,
then you just left.
Free will, she assumed.
Blurs and things floating.
Are you consumed?
all those things you didn't do?
Are you guilty or free?
Do you think about her?
She always thinks about you.
Author's Note
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I create people, places and things in my mind this is a fictional piece about one of those people.
I create people, places and things in my mind this is a fictional piece about one of those people.
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Re. When Their Eyes Meet Again
20th May 2020 2:19pm
This one buries itself deep, Nikks. We've all been there. And that photo is absolutely perfect. God, your mind, girl.
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Re: Re. When Their Eyes Meet Again
20th May 2020 4:24pm
Thank you Ahavati.
I think because I observe not just with my eyes but all my senses I pick up things that just never leave and evolve into a part of me. I always thought that the stories we create are memories someone at sometime had, maybe our past selves who knows..
My photos take themselves too. Sometimes I use old ones from instagram or I take one real quick and change the coloring. When i have to find a photo on the fly I take one word from my write and look for something in my immediate area that goes with that word and snap it. Again thank you 😘😘
I think because I observe not just with my eyes but all my senses I pick up things that just never leave and evolve into a part of me. I always thought that the stories we create are memories someone at sometime had, maybe our past selves who knows..
My photos take themselves too. Sometimes I use old ones from instagram or I take one real quick and change the coloring. When i have to find a photo on the fly I take one word from my write and look for something in my immediate area that goes with that word and snap it. Again thank you 😘😘
Re. When Their Eyes Meet Again
20th May 2020 2:32pm
Love this nikki ... the synergy between your poetry and photos is exponential ...
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Re: Re. When Their Eyes Meet Again
20th May 2020 4:25pm
Re. When Their Eyes Meet Again
20th May 2020 3:27pm
impactful.. & touching Niks... could imagine how this life's grand nonfiction inspires the staging fiction & perhaps the viceversa.
pic aligns to your verses.. in a layering or a higher holistic or a detailing specific... anywhich ways .. it adds much imapct to your art unique! create on xx:)
pic aligns to your verses.. in a layering or a higher holistic or a detailing specific... anywhich ways .. it adds much imapct to your art unique! create on xx:)
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Re: Re. When Their Eyes Meet Again
20th May 2020 4:27pm
Thank you. I like to tickle the minds eye
with words and photos. I appreciate your awesome compliment.
with words and photos. I appreciate your awesome compliment.
Re. When Their Eyes Meet Again
20th May 2020 4:12pm
Relationships, so complex. Always a struggle to remain on the same page, when we don’t emotions run rampant!. Great write N.
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20th May 2020 4:28pm
Re. When Their Eyes Meet Again
21st May 2020 3:45am
Dear N,
Choices and the “what might have been” conversation can be an overwhelming thought process. And Free Will has always confused me so I have a hard time organizing that thought ij my head. I love that you’ve created this fictional place and populated it with fictional characters. It recalled a situation for me in real life when I had to decide do I stay where I was or do I go? Excellent write. H🌷
Choices and the “what might have been” conversation can be an overwhelming thought process. And Free Will has always confused me so I have a hard time organizing that thought ij my head. I love that you’ve created this fictional place and populated it with fictional characters. It recalled a situation for me in real life when I had to decide do I stay where I was or do I go? Excellent write. H🌷
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Re: Re. When Their Eyes Meet Again
21st May 2020 1:54pm
Thank you. To stay or go, That's usually the hardest decision to make or the easiest, depends how much you like yourself and what your willing to sacrafice, if anything.
I was a lonely kid who loved her barbies, Ive been creating lives inside my head space forever, when I played barbies thats when I was quietest, all the dialogue happened in my brain.
I was a lonely kid who loved her barbies, Ive been creating lives inside my head space forever, when I played barbies thats when I was quietest, all the dialogue happened in my brain.
Re. When Their Eyes Meet Again
22nd May 2020 1:20pm
Excellent write ... Creating our own worlds is key to sanity and creativity ... Well done ... Love the pic ... Bless and love ... ..
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Re. When Their Eyes Meet Again
24th May 2020 00:08am
Goddamn, personae addiction is real, esp amongst the infinitely generative. You got universes inside you, Scheherazade. Fine, genuine work as well.
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