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In the dark
Soledad,
Her dad, turned dead, had died.
Found drunk was broke,
But stabbed and cooked.
In his boat alone,
wearing coat unknown.
The tide was strong!
They fought.
So wrong,
It was night.
That day,
He was killed, without light by him.
Some Ray, she read
But Killer they said.
Her dad, turned dead, had died.
Found drunk was broke,
But stabbed and cooked.
In his boat alone,
wearing coat unknown.
The tide was strong!
They fought.
So wrong,
It was night.
That day,
He was killed, without light by him.
Some Ray, she read
But Killer they said.
Written by
Write_Soul
(1)
Published 14th May 2020
Author's Note
There are lots of crimes committed in the dark which are only heard of when they finally appear in the news.
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Re. In the dark
14th May 2020 11:25am
Re. In the dark
14th May 2020 2:07pm
This is very enlightening and filled with truth and your author notes speaks volumes about this truth as darkness swirls the dead of night respect dear poetess
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Re: Re. In the dark
14th May 2020 5:14pm
crimes being committed in the dark away from sight has caused some people so much grief. Only hoping our pen will bring some things like these in the open. Thanks Stone223
Re: Re. In the dark
14th May 2020 5:51pm
Re. In the dark
14th May 2020 4:38pm
i loved the arrangement and words usage in this spill
For me, creative
& not all (mysterious) crimes make the news. . .
(fortunately yet often unfortunately)
For me, creative
& not all (mysterious) crimes make the news. . .
(fortunately yet often unfortunately)
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Re: Re. In the dark
14th May 2020 5:21pm
"...Crimes make the news" that's just the right observation and that's sadly the reality. You just added the body to this whole skeleton. Thanks Tallen (earth_empath)
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15th May 2020 5:42am
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