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Goosebumps
Rubbing, caressing tender flesh, gooses bumping, nipples sucking, lips locking, soaking wet.
Heavy breathing, fingers teasing, nerves quaking, body shaking, member hard - anticipating.
Inhibition waining, love making, outlines made in lights fading.
Into me, inside you, you're on my mind, I'm into you.
Heavy breathing, fingers teasing, nerves quaking, body shaking, member hard - anticipating.
Inhibition waining, love making, outlines made in lights fading.
Into me, inside you, you're on my mind, I'm into you.
Published 15th Jan 2012
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16th Jan 2012 6:28pm
19th Jan 2012 12:38pm
To one of your new homes amongst a creative group of writers.
While your piece is short, it speaks more fluently than many of the longer, writes.
Who couldn't read this and get a visual of eroticism.
Cheers
While your piece is short, it speaks more fluently than many of the longer, writes.
Who couldn't read this and get a visual of eroticism.
Cheers
21st Jan 2012 1:25am
Thank you Kym,
I'm still trying to find my own style. My confidence is growing.
I'm still trying to find my own style. My confidence is growing.
