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Body Of Rose
As a body of rose becomes my ghost
of fragrant petals for my loving host
as the attar weeps of wilted thorns
genuflecting to your pure of heart
For my blue eyes on trellis adorned
of love spawning the crystal dew
for a moment in time in the mist
like soft satin's mist airborne
With many things of love to be seen
before the winter's solstice brings
frost on the wintergreen
as the winds of autumn fly
In shadows before you awake
luring me to my restful sleep
as the attar weeps of wilted thorns
and the wetness returns
Of our forbidden rendezvous
in dreams, I sleep as the dawn glows
mystic rainbows of golden blue
on sandstones of love's equinox
As a body of rose becomes my ghost
of fragrant petals for my loving host
in plain sight of a midnight rainbow
kissing among the yew
of fragrant petals for my loving host
as the attar weeps of wilted thorns
genuflecting to your pure of heart
For my blue eyes on trellis adorned
of love spawning the crystal dew
for a moment in time in the mist
like soft satin's mist airborne
With many things of love to be seen
before the winter's solstice brings
frost on the wintergreen
as the winds of autumn fly
In shadows before you awake
luring me to my restful sleep
as the attar weeps of wilted thorns
and the wetness returns
Of our forbidden rendezvous
in dreams, I sleep as the dawn glows
mystic rainbows of golden blue
on sandstones of love's equinox
As a body of rose becomes my ghost
of fragrant petals for my loving host
in plain sight of a midnight rainbow
kissing among the yew
Written by
adagio
Published 12th May 2020
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Re. Body Of Rose
12th May 2020 8:22pm
Nicely poeted ... made me think of "A Rose for Emily" by Faulkner ... though I don't know why ...
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12th May 2020 8:26pm
I wrote that some months ago and have kept it as one of my favorites. I know "love" doesn't do well on DUP, but I am a romantic.
Re: Re. Body Of Rose
12th May 2020 8:30pm
I reread this ... straight to the RL ... be proud to be a romantic ... in "such a graceless age" ... to quote Henley ... besides who would help me man the walls of romance if you weren't here ...
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12th May 2020 11:57pm
Re. Body Of Rose
13th May 2020 1:27am
I only wish I could write as well as you do! Your writing continues to amaze me.
Also, embrace the fact that you are a romantic!
Also, embrace the fact that you are a romantic!
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13th May 2020 1:47am
I appreciate that. I just like to dabble with words. I am certainly not gifted.
Re. Body Of Rose
13th May 2020 10:28am
This is gorgeous! Simply adore the choice of words... and the way they have been weaved into a true art...
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2023 3:04pm
Nicely penned
Such a unique perspective..
Such a unique perspective..
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