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Burning Diary In A Shipless Ocean
Published 11th May 2020
Author's Note
#ERULGCT 33. Umanoid. Some say the past is a foreign country. Ok by me. Was sick of living in Fuckedupville Central ;) My love is as sharp as a needle in the eye xx PLEASE ALL STAY SAFE
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12th May 2020 2:10am
This has such impact in it's brevity, each line is the essence of economy, which is truly a feat. The human animal possesses the capacity to explore it's own existence and it's environment with sagacity beyond that which is strictly necessary to survive. We examine the past, we feel it's pull, we simultaneously live in the eternal now. Being fully present is empowering. I have found the mind is not a single voice, it is a miasma of voices, each with it's own vibration. This write touches into a lot of that for me.
12th May 2020 2:19pm
I agree with Daniel, and on into... the far reaches of base desires, lust, the flesh grasping the spiritual....
13th May 2020 5:42pm
you bring in the tranquilly spiritual love of an eternal each now... they say love & this life led by love ..in all its ups & downs n pains & seasons.. is a 'vaelvi' a worship a devoution by itself... when the souleye awakens.. when love is brimmingly in feltness to the core... all the past & its hardness only flows now in an ever present truth of Love whatev the impeding blockade be ..ahh my blabberations doesnt justify your superb brevity you lay down strong as ev . . burning diary' 'flame wildfire' says it all .. vividly intense! ..Love me xx
