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Keep on fighting
Keep on fighting even though you're hurt,
I'll be your hero and help you find the right words,
Keep on fighting that's what the voices say,
If "hope" had wings it would just flyaway,
My heart so red,
Just feels dead,
Why do I bother to post my poems online?
No one gives a fuck they're lying all the time,
I keep on fighting but I'm not strong enough,
Too bad I didn't drown myself long enough,
I'll take this "ball of light" with me to my grave,
Cause right now that's all I need to be saved.[/b]
I'll be your hero and help you find the right words,
Keep on fighting that's what the voices say,
If "hope" had wings it would just flyaway,
My heart so red,
Just feels dead,
Why do I bother to post my poems online?
No one gives a fuck they're lying all the time,
I keep on fighting but I'm not strong enough,
Too bad I didn't drown myself long enough,
I'll take this "ball of light" with me to my grave,
Cause right now that's all I need to be saved.[/b]
Published 10th May 2020
Author's Note
I write my own dark poetry based off of what I've been through and experienced.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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10th May 2020 7:31am
10th May 2020 9:21pm
Thanks I just feel like posting is a waste cause no one ever comments
10th May 2020 9:48pm
I understand that. I don’t know why people don’t. I always try to share my thoughts and reactions. For me, I think as poets, we strive to be heard and seen. So a simple comments is a way to support one another, saying I see you, I hear you. It should be done more, but what do I know?
Your poems get thousands of comments and mine barely get any people don't appreciate my poetry I miss quizilla I got lots of compliments on my poems now I'm here on this dumb website I'm just gonna stop posting it's a waste of my time.
12th May 2020 8:02am
