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The Sounds You Make...
Dazedly I sit there
And stare
Straight up at the ceiling
Just listening
To the sounds you make
While eating
My streaming wet pussy,
Oh you make it sound good and juicy
As you take your time with it
Making my body shake
Thrilling in it,
And as I'm there
Just staring
Out at nowhere
I'm realizing
That this is a glorious way
To end such a stressful day...
Blessed is what I feel to know
Someone is there waiting
And ready to go
Straight down on me
Taking care of this sweet pussy,
Love feeling dazed
While listening
And visualizing
That mouth sipping and slurping
My body's just twisting and jerking,
Sounds like you can't get enough of me moaning and groaning,
Man, can't imagine wanting
To be anywhere
But right there
Paralyzed
While Experiencing
The sweet sounds you make...
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By Tara A.
And stare
Straight up at the ceiling
Just listening
To the sounds you make
While eating
My streaming wet pussy,
Oh you make it sound good and juicy
As you take your time with it
Making my body shake
Thrilling in it,
And as I'm there
Just staring
Out at nowhere
I'm realizing
That this is a glorious way
To end such a stressful day...
Blessed is what I feel to know
Someone is there waiting
And ready to go
Straight down on me
Taking care of this sweet pussy,
Love feeling dazed
While listening
And visualizing
That mouth sipping and slurping
My body's just twisting and jerking,
Sounds like you can't get enough of me moaning and groaning,
Man, can't imagine wanting
To be anywhere
But right there
Paralyzed
While Experiencing
The sweet sounds you make...
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By Tara A.
Published 14th Jan 2012
| Edited 15th Jan 2012
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2012 00:54am
Nice imagery and pace, drew me in and flowed right to the end. It had a real feel of satisfaction and 'mellowed out' about it, despite the raunchy topic. One 'glitch' for me - you used the word pussy twice, too quickly imho - and 'slurping' is a fowl word to use about eating anything - let alone sweet pussy! Just my two cents. Overall - very nice. R.
15th Jan 2012 1:18am
Thank you, redT, I 'preciate the nice way u put that. Thanks for stopping an reading an critiquing:)
Anonymous
15th Jan 2012 1:51pm
I really enjoyed this poem; it drew me in, and I could easily visualize (and enjoy!) the imagery. You've given voice to one of MY favorite ways to close a stressful day--really nice poem, this is!!
15th Jan 2012 4:11pm
Anonymous
16th Jan 2012 1:25am
beautifully written....enjoyable!!!!!
16th Jan 2012 1:34am
22nd Jan 2012 4:38pm
You've described masterfully, one of my favorite pastimes.
Although I do not make noise when I eat. ;)
Although I do not make noise when I eat. ;)
22nd Jan 2012 8:06pm
;) You sure? You may not realize you make sounds...I'm just saying...;) N e ways, getting it is one of my favorite pastimes too...;) Thanks for reading!
