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There’s something I feel
when I look into your eyes
that touches me
deep in my soul.
A knowing, a sharing
a connection so caring,
an energy that makes
me feel whole.
Morganpoet
when I look into your eyes
that touches me
deep in my soul.
A knowing, a sharing
a connection so caring,
an energy that makes
me feel whole.
Morganpoet
Published 5th May 2020
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5th May 2020 2:38pm
Nice and simple ... in a powerfully poetic way ... says so much ... with so little ... nothing more required ... just lovely ...
9th May 2020 3:16pm
Thanks LilDragonFly
I wrote this one just after our son was born, I think it applies equally to him and his Dad! :)
I wrote this one just after our son was born, I think it applies equally to him and his Dad! :)
