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Fifty words for an outstanding individual
Birdsong birthday
morning break
sunshine rain awake
sleepy eye your yawn still prostrate
for each year, times horoscope
greying hair all falling out
seeping pain comes tired smiles
cards assembled, thousands wrote
100 laps round the garden course
over Thirty Million Pounds were raised
heroic Captain TOM in greatest PRAISE
morning break
sunshine rain awake
sleepy eye your yawn still prostrate
for each year, times horoscope
greying hair all falling out
seeping pain comes tired smiles
cards assembled, thousands wrote
100 laps round the garden course
over Thirty Million Pounds were raised
heroic Captain TOM in greatest PRAISE
Published 3rd May 2020
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3rd May 2020 2:34pm
OMG! I followed that and thought what he did was FANTASTIC! Lovely tribute, Slip. You should write it in a card and post it!
thanks Ahavati wrote it for 50 (unique) words Comp I HAVE missed your support but the 30 day comp I understand took precedent and great respect for running it my best as ever Slip
