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The He that sees me
Oh God she clings
I wish she would not
And she blinks
Through her stupid glasses
I wish she would not
Wear that thing…idiot.
She uses contact lens
Purple I kid you not
the simpering idiot
If not for her warm
Arms and huge boobs
She would be history
She is five feet tall
A midget actually
And all of 60 kilos
She talks like a dreamer
That has never woken up
And she is a writer?
A five feet tall woman
Who thinks like a girl,
Whose Junoesque figure
Makes a man dream
But whose mind
Is a twisted labyrinth
I wish she would not
And she blinks
Through her stupid glasses
I wish she would not
Wear that thing…idiot.
She uses contact lens
Purple I kid you not
the simpering idiot
If not for her warm
Arms and huge boobs
She would be history
She is five feet tall
A midget actually
And all of 60 kilos
She talks like a dreamer
That has never woken up
And she is a writer?
A five feet tall woman
Who thinks like a girl,
Whose Junoesque figure
Makes a man dream
But whose mind
Is a twisted labyrinth
Published 13th Jan 2012
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13th Jan 2012 9:47am
13th Jan 2012 11:04am
hug boobs ay gracey ? yay ha ha ha I remember this of course , nicer poem but a little harsh on yourself at times I think :)
Oh hey! thanks for pointing that out! thanks...oh Paul ..! Thanks for commenting...
13th Jan 2012 6:04pm
I like everything you are doing with this poem. I think you should work some commas into the first two stanzas. I think it would help.
13th Jan 2012 10:28pm
Thank you matthew, for kindly reading and commenting. You are very kind. Yes you are right about the commas.
14th Jan 2012 9:34am
reflection's not often a good thing. Usually takes a bad situation to reflect, and there's nothing more cool than glasses! ;) nice poem.
14th Jan 2012 3:50pm
Well...it was a poem about another person's reflection of me..thanks MrAlptraum for reading and commenting.
