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observe
If you wish to observe
close your eyes
and reverse
back to the place
where we amerged
from the genetics
not of our birth
close your eyes
and reverse
back to the place
where we amerged
from the genetics
not of our birth
Published 12th Jan 2012
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12th Jan 2012 6:12pm
A little rhym in short time. i like how you broke it down to slowly make sense... your style is almost like confuscious or small quotes, little ideas to consider in the moment... i would like to read any thing you've done that contains more than just a few scentences. just to see if your capable of expanding these thoughts an a broader level. although there is a special quality in your simplicity. can't put my finger on it...??
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