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Set Me Free (freestyle rap)
Ok
Here I go
Freestyle rappin'
not sure how this will go
but let's give it a try, I got nothing else to show
Love me, hate me
I don't care, just let me be
You see,
I come from a world where I was born to lose
but to live and write, that's what I choose
All I can ask is for you to help me gain
the knowledge I need in order to win this game
where my smile will shine
with the words of this rhyme
to the stars and back
I'll no longer be a drag
cuz all this pain inside
will no longer have to hide
and if this rap can help
then it's certainly worth the try.
Here I go
Freestyle rappin'
not sure how this will go
but let's give it a try, I got nothing else to show
Love me, hate me
I don't care, just let me be
You see,
I come from a world where I was born to lose
but to live and write, that's what I choose
All I can ask is for you to help me gain
the knowledge I need in order to win this game
where my smile will shine
with the words of this rhyme
to the stars and back
I'll no longer be a drag
cuz all this pain inside
will no longer have to hide
and if this rap can help
then it's certainly worth the try.
Published 21st Apr 2020
Author's Note
This is my first rap and it's for a competition called Rap Battle by DU member gazellemon.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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26th Apr 2020 3:02pm
27th Apr 2020 00:38am
5th Oct 2020 7:21am
You've come a long way from your 'eagle catching a fish observation'. Keep up the good progress!
