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HE IS PERHAPS DESCENDED FROM A LONG LINE OF MONSTERS
so the one who touched him
had been touched by another
and that one too
and that one too
and their evil passed
one to the next
and no one to touch
and no where left
to be
or do
because to touch
is poison
and to do
is evil
and those roots
twist
vertebrae to
vertebrae
and cell to cell
and there are no
guarantees
that what lays
dormant
will not rise
again
and prison
or death
is all that’s left
had been touched by another
and that one too
and that one too
and their evil passed
one to the next
and no one to touch
and no where left
to be
or do
because to touch
is poison
and to do
is evil
and those roots
twist
vertebrae to
vertebrae
and cell to cell
and there are no
guarantees
that what lays
dormant
will not rise
again
and prison
or death
is all that’s left
Author's Note
Pedophiles -- the monsters among us -- the most despised and hated of men. See them on the local news wide eyed and disheveled and basically monstrous and wonder WTF(?) -- why(?). Or at least I do. I read that many pedophiles were indeed molested.
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19th Apr 2020 2:20pm
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19th Apr 2020 2:53pm
Thanks, L.
The horrors unfold all around us, but it's always a shock to hear about it. Like human trafficking. In my state in particular. It's just difficult to fathom.
The horrors unfold all around us, but it's always a shock to hear about it. Like human trafficking. In my state in particular. It's just difficult to fathom.
Re. HE IS PERHAPS DESCENDED FROM A LONG LINE OF MONSTERS
19th Apr 2020 2:46pm
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19th Apr 2020 3:28pm
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19th Apr 2020 2:56pm
Dear J,
This is a phenomenal write. You’ve collected brilliantly how these behaviors can perpetuate themselves. I do wonder at times when and how things decline for people and their response to situations. Since I can never come up with an answer I get dejected and switch thoughts. Well written. H🌷
This is a phenomenal write. You’ve collected brilliantly how these behaviors can perpetuate themselves. I do wonder at times when and how things decline for people and their response to situations. Since I can never come up with an answer I get dejected and switch thoughts. Well written. H🌷
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19th Apr 2020 3:50pm
Thank you so much, Honoria.
Some behaviors baffle and amaze.
Really, all behaviors can seem a mystery.
Thank you again.
Some behaviors baffle and amaze.
Really, all behaviors can seem a mystery.
Thank you again.
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19th Apr 2020 3:05pm
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19th Apr 2020 4:06pm
Thanks for reading, Ahavati.
It is dark.
I wanted to write it without using the words molest or pedophile in the poem, but then worried it would be misinterpreted, and went ahead and put in my comment.
A recent local incident sparked the conversation that sparked this effort.
Thanks again.
It is dark.
I wanted to write it without using the words molest or pedophile in the poem, but then worried it would be misinterpreted, and went ahead and put in my comment.
A recent local incident sparked the conversation that sparked this effort.
Thanks again.
Re. HE IS PERHAPS DESCENDED FROM A LONG LINE OF MONSTERS
19th Apr 2020 7:29pm
Your comment "difficult to fathom."
Right there with Ya Java...it always shocks...it shouldn't by this day and age and yet...sickens and shocks!!!
The minimalist approach works best for this Ink I would say, it punches better and suits the subject better...much is missing from people of this ilk.
Excellence!!!
Right there with Ya Java...it always shocks...it shouldn't by this day and age and yet...sickens and shocks!!!
The minimalist approach works best for this Ink I would say, it punches better and suits the subject better...much is missing from people of this ilk.
Excellence!!!
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19th Apr 2020 8:04pm
Thanks, friend.
You're right...we should be used to it.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
You're right...we should be used to it.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
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19th Apr 2020 11:41pm
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20th Apr 2020 1:49am