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Smart Writing Java, the inspiration shows with this flurry.
It read fast and I wonder if it was Written with same gusto?
This ink rolls off the tongue nicely-Well Done!!!

Thanks so much, my friend.
It was really a quick write but I am an obsessive editor, so it changed somewhat from the original effort.
I've been scribbling a lot lately.
Thanks again for commenting.
You make my day.

Many folks are obsessive editors and I tell You what, if I start editing it is the same for me...
I used to get so mad at myself because I couldn't stop.
I'd hang on to stuff for days (as every line became shorter lol )
Probably about two-thee yrs. ago I put my foot down...pretty much no editing at all except for the misspells or a word in a line.
I'm one of those people who, hates the Write the next day...I like something I do the day of posting, but after that...I scoff and sneer
Thinking of all the better ways I could have written it (maybe that's where my non-editing could better things hahaa)  

I like that
I know from experience you can kill a thing with editing  -- just suck the life right out of a poem trying to perfect it.
Still, it's hard to stop, and there is such a evolution sometimes between the first bits of a thing and the finished piece.
One wishes all his spills were gems.
I get where you're coming from though, and certainly respect it.
I'm still learning.

Lovely.

Thank you so much.
Always appreciated.

This terse spill
wastes nothing
in each line.

well done

Thank you much, Tallen.